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The role of true history in poetic craft

Updated: Nov 22, 2022

Is it important for a poem to be entirely true?


At what point should a poet learn to dispense with the truth and write something that is more poignant, more fantastical, more ridiculous or seemingly "more true" than the truth itself?


Here's a poem that describes me "crying bitterly on the front steps of the school" - something that never really happened, but whose imagining conveys a deeper truth of my desolation after leaving Year 12. Would it have been better if I had simply said I had become lost after leaving? What do you think?

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high school was the same as from Harry Potter.

whorled by deep fascinations,

eventually each of us left, tastelessly.

i cried bitterly on the front steps of the school

as its night breezes touched my bare parts.


more than half my life

has been spent out of that time,

a few facebook connections keep the pace of living,

but apart from that i wonder why

and how and whether about my lost friends.


i remember shouting agonised on so many occasions

among the timbres of my family’s raucous ignorance:


and now those vain shouts echo in my thoughts:

across the globe, and deep into the years toward death,

i yell for old acquaintance to return.


 
 
 

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WILDAIR THOUGHTS: GIFTS FOR THE ORACULAR

11 May 2026

Preening myself in this sweetsick lake’s plage,
My majesty of plumage, wet with decoupage,

Stirring the grasses, wind under my wings,
Silent, to hear how your own brilliance sings!

Cold to the moisture, clay to melted earth,
Forming of heart and its bursting-proud berth,

Needling to wicks of fragrance, stark in air,
Whence crawls the creaks of love, once nestled there.

The querulous, the queer now standing here
Smaller than they appear, remember with good cheer

The gifts of heartstrung chattels, whet with hands
To hold me dear, where flung the mountain sands!

Come forward, ye who travelled here alone!
Whence we have strayed, and given, soon be gone!

Whether from ice of throne, or steel icon—
Whence we have strayed, and given, soon be gone!


 

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© Marcus Ten Low, 2026

Please be considerate of intellectual property and its origins. Kind To All Beings!

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